Dianne E. Butts About Writing
The Writing E-zine for Beginning and Intermediate Writers.
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Cover Story:
"Submitting Your Books (Write a Book Proposal?! Help!)"
Before writing your book, there's a lot you need to know. First of all, if you're writing nonfiction, you don't want to write that book yet. Book publishers won't look at it. They don't want to see your manuscript. They want to see a book proposal.
Now if that sounds disappointing to you, it shouldn't. If you are going to write an effective, successful book, you need to think about a lot of things before you start. Like, who is your audience? What is it you want to say in your book--the overriding message? Will anyone be interested in reading that? Who are you going to sell your book to? How are you going to reach that market? If you take the time to figure out all the important things before writing your book, you'll stand a far greater chance of producing a book a publisher will be interested in. Writing a book proposal first forces you to think through your project, answer all the important questions, and get it organized.
There are plenty of books about writing book proposals that
you can learn from. One I recommend is W. Terry Whalin's Book Proposals that
$ell: 21 Secrets to Speed Your Success (Write Now! Publications, 2005,
$14.00). (Book Proposals That Sell) Mr. Whalin was an editor for many years and
is now an agent. He knows how the publishing industry works, what editors are looking for,
and what gets
proposals rejected. I read through his book (and underlined nearly everything)
and then I read through it again and took it one step at a time. I made a list
of the items that I needed to include in my proposal. And then I set about
writing each of these as a separate piece for my own book proposal.
What to Include in Your Book Proposal
There is no set way to write a book proposal. However, there are certain items every book proposal should include. As I shaped my own proposal, it has changed and morphed and evolved, but below is the list of the items included in my nonfiction book proposal. You might write a few sentences or a few paragraphs for each of these items:
The premise of the book.
An overview of the book.
The audience or market. Who will buy your book?
Category. Which shelf will we find your book on in the bookstore? Find a list of categories for Christian books here: http://www.cbaonline.org/csc_site/documents/bisac_sublist_100906.xls (Or go to www.CBAOnline.org and look for the BISAC code.)
Competitive titles. What books will yours compete against? Give a brief statement saying, "My book is similar to ______ but is different because _____."
Marketing. How will you market and promote your book? Be specific. Tell the publisher what you will do to sell copies of your book.
What qualifies you to write this book.
Why this book should be published now.
Your writing credentials.
The projected length of your finished manuscript. (Make sure it is within the word count the publisher publishes.)
When you can deliver the finished manuscript, should the publisher request it.
One to three sample chapters, according to what the publisher wants.
Before you submit your book proposal, you should obtain the writers guidelines from the publisher or agent you want to send it to and make sure your proposal delivers what they want. Most of the time, you will need to tweak your proposal for each publisher. Sound like a pain? Do it anyway. If you don't, you won't make a good impression.
The purpose of your book proposal is to give the editor at a publishing house or an agent enough information to determine if he or she wants to offer you a book contract. Therefore, it must be your very best writing. It must be coherent and organized and thorough. In other words, it must be excellent. This is probably the first impression you're making with the editor or agent (unless you've talked to or submitted to him or her before), so it is incredibly important to make it a good one. You should consider getting your book proposal critiqued and/or professionally edited just like your manuscript before you submit it. Take no chances. You have everything riding on your book proposal.
"Your proposal exists to convince publishers that you can write, that you have a valuable project, and that it fits in with what they do." Judy Perry, acquisitions editor for Beacon Hill Press in her workshop "Building Your Book from the Ground Up." Colorado Christian Writers Conference, Estes Park, Colorado, May 2007.
As another excellent resource to help you shape your nonfiction book and proposal, I recommend the five DVDs (or tapes) of the continuing session "Building Your [Nonfiction] Book from the Ground Up" recorded at the 2007 Colorado Christian Writer's Conference (www.WriteHisAnswer.com). These workshops were taught by Bonnie Perry, director of Beacon Hill Press, and Judith Perry, acquisitions editor at Beacon Hill Press. You may purchase this five-part continuing session on cassette tape or DVD from JoyCo Multimedia, 8795 Ralston Road #113, Arvada, CO 80002. (303)421-0093. Or online at JoyCoMultimedia.com Send $27.50 + $7.00 shipping. Order DVDs DC2A, B, C, D, and E or tapes TC2A, B, C, D, and E.
Dianne's "Get Organized" Tip
Like your magazine articles, you will need a way to keep track of your submissions of your book proposal. I use the same system I use for my articles which I described in the August 2007 e-zine.
Section 2:
Q & A: Dianne Answers Your Questions about Writing
Q: Can I send my book proposal to more than one publisher at a time?
A: Yes, and I advise that you do so. You may wait several months to hear back and if you wait to hear from one before submitting to another, your book may be published posthumously. Most publishers now understand you will be submitting elsewhere simultaneously. Just make it clear in your cover letter or on the first page of your proposal that, "This is a simultaneous submission." You don't need to tell them where else you've sent it.
Q: What about submitting to agents?
A: It's the same procedure as submitting to publishers. Get your book proposal generally in order. Get the agency's writers guidelines. Like publishers, most are available on their web site or by e-mail, or send your request with a SASE by regular mail. Tweak your proposal to deliver exactly what the agent wants to see. Let him or her know it's a simultaneous submission.
Q: Should I submit to publishers or agents?
A: I recommend you go for both a publisher and an agent at the same time. If you find a publisher first, you can always contact the agent(s) and tell them you've been offered a contract and ask if he or she would negotiate the contract for you.
Sidebar
"How Do I Submit My Fiction Book?"
Submitting a fiction novel is just a little bit different than submitting your nonfiction book. For starters, a publisher is mostly likely going to want to see a completed manuscript from a first-time author. However, don't just send your manuscript to a publisher. You will still need to submit a book proposal. There are books available to help you write your proposal for your novel. I'd start looking for one at www.WritersDigestBookClub.com . In addition to the items above that apply, for your fiction proposal you will also need to include a:
Synopsis. Briefly (in a couple pages) tell your entire story. (Yes, that includes the surprise ending. Your editor wants to know you can finish the story and the book.)
The purpose of your fiction book proposal is to entice the editor enough to make him or her want to read more...and request your manuscript.
Section 3:
Period.
It isn't easy to write book proposals. It takes a lot of time and a lot of effort. But like anything else, it gets easier with practice. Do the homework you need to do to write a great proposal. Strive for excellence. This is the document that will (or won't) open the doors to publication for you. Make it your best effort.
You can do it! Period. No buts about it.
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Bio: Dianne E. Butts has been writing for publication since 1989 with 200+ articles in more than 50 periodicals and over a dozen books. Her articles have appeared in Focus on the Family magazine, The Lookout, Light and Life, The Salvation Army's War Cry, The Plain Truth, On Mission, Bible Advocate, Live, Evangel, the Christian Motorcyclists Association's HeartBeat, The Quiet Hour, Christian Communicator, and SpiritLedWriter.com. Book contributions include stories in Chicken Soup for the Christian Soul 2, For Better or Worse: A Devotional for Married Couples by Marlene Bagnull, Beauty is Soul Deep, A Cup of Comfort Devotional for Women and Mothers, and Zondervan's New Women's Devotional Bible. Her work has appeared in Great Britain, Poland, Bulgaria, Canada, and Korea.
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Subtopic 1:
Pull Quote
"Spelling, grammar, style, and format are what you're wearing to the interview." Judy Perry, acquisitions editor for Beacon Hill Press in her workshop "Building Your Book from the Ground Up." Colorado Christian Writers Conference, Estes Park, Colorado, May 2007.
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Helpful Resources
For your nonfiction book proposals, Book Proposals that $ell: 21
Secrets to Speed Your Success by W. Terry Whalin. Book Proposals That Sell
"Building Your [Nonfiction] Book from the Ground Up" recorded at the 2007 Colorado Christian Writer's Conference (www.WriteHisAnswer.com). Taught by Bonnie Perry, director of Beacon Hill Press, and Judith Perry, acquisitions editor at Beacon Hill Press. Purchase this five-part continuing session on cassette tape or DVD from JoyCo Multimedia, 8795 Ralston Road #113, Arvada, CO 80002, (303)421-0093. Send $27.50 + $7.00 shipping. Online at www.joycomultimedia.com. Order tapes TC2A, B, C, D, and E, or DVDs DC2A, B, C, D, and E.
The following books are on my ever growing (never shrinking) "to be read"
pile. They look like great resources to help you write fiction, and they may
talk some about getting your novel published, but please know they are not
specifically books on how to write a fiction proposal:
Your First Novel (Your First Novel: A Published Author and a Top Agent Share Keys to Achieving Your Dream),
Hooked (Hooked: Write Fiction That Grabs Readers at Page One and Never Lets Them Go
),
and
First Draft in 30 Days (First Draft In 30 Days: A Novel Writer's System for Building a Complete and Cohesive Manuscript
).
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Coming Conferences:
September 8 - American Christian Writers, Colorado Springs, CO. www.ACWriters.com
September 13-16 - The Soul Tells a Story, Tucson, AZ. www.desertrenewal.ort/retreatscalendar.htm
September 21 - 22: Act One: Writing for Hollywood Screenwriting Weekend, Washington D.C.. Also: Hollywood Insider Event Sept. 22, 3:00-6:00 pm, $10. www.actoneprogram.com
September 20 - 23: American Christian Fiction Writers Conference featuring novelist and columnist for Writer's Digest, James Scott Bell. Dallas, Texas. www.americanchristianfictionwriters.com/conference/ www.acfw.com
September 30 - October 3: Sandy Cove Christian Writers Conference, North East, Maryland. 800-234-2683 www.jameswatkins.com/sandycove.htm www.sandycove.org
October 7 - 11: Advanced Blue Ridge Mountains Christian Writers Conference, LifeWay Ridgecrest Conference Center, North Carolina. www.lifeway.com/christianwriters
October 19, 20 - Act One presents "The Hollywood Insider Event" October 19th and Act One Screenwriting Weekend October 19-20, 2007. Grandville, MI. www.actoneprogram.com .
October 17-21 - Glorieta Christian Writers Conference, Glorieta, New Mexico. www.glorietachristianwritersconference.com 1-800-433-6633
October 19-21 - Women Writing the West, Colorado Springs, CO. http://womenwritingthewest.org
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Dianne's Writing News
My story "Dear America: Under God You Are a Blessing,"
an adaptation from my book Dear America, appears in the recently
released book Secure the Fort (And Remain Under God): A Military Mother's
Message to America (Secure the Fort (And Remain Under God)) by Lucy Cain (Xlibris, July 2007).
Article: "Wanna Go To Church?" appears in the October, 14, 2007, issue of Encounter: The Magazine for teens.
Writing Opportunities
Good Morning Christian Writer is a devotional for Christian writers being compiled by Crystal A. Murray. Deadline extended to September 30, 2007. Information at http://morningwriter.blogspot.com E-mail: morningwriter @ gmail.com (delete the spaces*).
A Cup of Comfort: My Teacher Is My Hero wants true stories 850-2000 words. Deadline September 5, 2007. Other titles coming on mothers and fathers. www.literarycottage.com Click on "Hero Series Guidelines."
Of the Heart series: Wants poetry and short stories. Posted deadline was July 2007 but that may be for the first book. Thomas C. White. www.BookMarketingSolutions.com No mention of payment. Titles: Yearnings of the Heart: A Mosaic of Things Hoped for, Passions of the Heart: A Mosaic of One's Capacity to Love, Railing of the Heart: The People of a Nation Speak, Celebrations of the Heart: A Mosaic of Life's Joys & Triumph, and Sorrows of the Heart: A Mosaic of Life's Tragedies.
Taking Flight: Living Life Passionately: 1200-1500 words. Connie Pombo. www.conniepombo.com/writingopportunities.htm Guidelines and sample stories: pom644 @ earthlink.net (delete the spaces).
Called Alongside: Sharing the Joys of a Mentoring Relationship: 250-350 words. Connie Pombo. www.conniepombo.com/writingopportunities.htm Guidelines and sample stories: pom644 @ earthlink.net (delete the spaces).
www.TouchedByTheHandOfGod.com Doesn't appear to be a paying market. (I advise you don't send anything you wish to resell.)
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